One If : A Thrilling Young Adult Sci-Fi Fantasy Adenture

One If is a well-written science fiction by Carol B. Allen, which presents a compelling and imaginative story about three teenagers, Parker, Edison, and Henley, who are unexpectedly kidnapped and transported to the mysterious world of Spyridon after encountering a seemingly ordinary hummingbird. As they navigate this ethereal realm, they discover a planet facing an environmental catastrophe, with its avian society fighting for survival. The planet brims with political intrigue, threats of war, and ecological disaster. The teens are tasked with helping Spyridon’s inhabitants address environmental stewardship issues. They must face many challenges, but falling in love only makes matters worse. And what if one of the stolen was actually destined to rule the same world that took her from hers?

Carol B. Allen creates a work pulsing with drama, and I enjoyed the sparkling dialogue. The author uses traditional devices to create scenes with vivid descriptions. I enjoyed the characters, especially Parker, whose curiosity and scientific mind is a moral compass, and Henley, whose skepticism and defiance create the tension and realism in the story. Edison’s earnestness complements the trio’s collective bravery. The setting—a floating, cloud-filled planet with majestic structures and mystical landscapes—creates a surreal, otherworldly atmosphere that is both beautiful and foreboding. The book employs vivid visual techniques—floating scenes, flying, and dynamic lighting—to evoke this other dimension vividly. The dialogue is sharp and witty, and I loved how the author uses it to explore the emotional depth of the characters. I was fascinated by the author’s ability to blend science fiction with moral inquiry, the skillful use of visual and auditory cues, and the cinematic storytelling that leaves you feeling like you’ve just watched an enthralling science fiction movie when you turn the last page.